Moment in time project
What I did was the first time I got to operate a backhoe and more was what we were doing in the work and what I did with the machine. I loved it and thought that it was the best time of my life and doing this project made me feel better about how I did the writing. What I like was how we were learning how to write a story and what we did to improve the writing.
In this project I learned how to write in away that makes it more like a story and what we did to make it better on how we can make it easy for the reader to understand what we did and what they are picturing in there head. We watch a video on what makes a better story and what can we do to make so that the reader can feel what we felt and see what we saw in our stories. Did some peer criticizes so that we can fix what is miss spelled and what we should get redid of some sentience.
What stood out to me was the way I explained what I did and where we were and what I was doing. The thing that I would have changed was giving it less detail because I had a bit to much explaining. If I did less explaining then it might have made it a page long then two and a fourth of a page.
My personal achievement in this project was that I was not good at writing a good story but after this project I found ways to make a story and what I did was great. I had some challenges that I had but after learning about ways to slip thorough the challenges it worked out okay. I think that if I want to make my own story I would use the project as something that can help me.
In this project I learned how to write in away that makes it more like a story and what we did to make it better on how we can make it easy for the reader to understand what we did and what they are picturing in there head. We watch a video on what makes a better story and what can we do to make so that the reader can feel what we felt and see what we saw in our stories. Did some peer criticizes so that we can fix what is miss spelled and what we should get redid of some sentience.
What stood out to me was the way I explained what I did and where we were and what I was doing. The thing that I would have changed was giving it less detail because I had a bit to much explaining. If I did less explaining then it might have made it a page long then two and a fourth of a page.
My personal achievement in this project was that I was not good at writing a good story but after this project I found ways to make a story and what I did was great. I had some challenges that I had but after learning about ways to slip thorough the challenges it worked out okay. I think that if I want to make my own story I would use the project as something that can help me.